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Crack! Crack! the three wise brothers Alex Mack and Jack were walking down a dead and spooky trail that nobody used ever. It was almost midnight the three brothers appeared to find this River it was too treacherous to path or swim through. They used their powerful wands to build a bridge suddenly death appeared when the oldest brother was about to pass the bridge‘’uh oh said Mack the middle brother what is going on’’. and the dead tree turned into death . Death said I will give you one wish the oldest brother wanted a teleportation cloak but death tricked him and always knew where he was going to teleport when the brother teleported away. But death would find him anyways. The second brother wanted to go back in time but death also tricked the second brother and knew what century he would go to. The third brother was smarter than his other brothers he wanted an invisibility cloak death did not want to give it to him but he had to. He got his invisibility cloak then all the brothers went walking home. They all fell asleep when they got home the third brother did not feel safe so he put his invisibility cloak on him. When it was the next morning Alex the oldest brother went outside to brag about himself he was in the most busy bit of town and showed everyone his teleportation cloak. He said I am the best in town and the whole intire world. He teleported everywhere shops and to his home then one night the most popular guy in town went and killed the oldest brother when death was supposed to do it so he killed the popular guy got killed by death as well because death really wanted to kill him death went to go and find the second brother on death’s tracking device that he put on him he was in 1988 so death went there and saw him in the park death was about to kill him but he went to 1987 so deathwent there the second brother mack saw death and quickly teleported 1986 but death was there first but quickly mack teleported he went to his house and killed himself that was death’s plan all along. The third brother death could not find because of the invisibility cloak he searched for years and years and years until when the third brother jack gave up when he was about 70 and gave his invisibility cloak to his son he said to his before he left I Love you so much and always have this over you and gave his son a kiss on the cheek and death took jack an flew away with him.
THE END
Crack! Crack! the three wise brothers Alex Mack and Jack were walking down a dead and spooky trail that nobody used ever. It was almost midnight the three brothers appeared to find this River it was too treacherous to path or swim through. They used their powerful wands to build a bridge suddenly death appeared when the oldest brother was about to pass the bridge‘’uh oh said Mack the middle brother what is going on’’. and the dead tree turned into death . Death said I will give you one wish the oldest brother wanted a teleportation cloak but death tricked him and always knew where he was going to teleport when the brother teleported away. But death would find him anyways. The second brother wanted to go back in time but death also tricked the second brother and knew what century he would go to. The third brother was smarter than his other brothers he wanted an invisibility cloak death did not want to give it to him but he had to. He got his invisibility cloak then all the brothers went walking home. They all fell asleep when they got home the third brother did not feel safe so he put his invisibility cloak on him. When it was the next morning Alex the oldest brother went outside to brag about himself he was in the most busy bit of town and showed everyone his teleportation cloak. He said I am the best in town and the whole intire world. He teleported everywhere shops and to his home then one night the most popular guy in town went and killed the oldest brother when death was supposed to do it so he killed the popular guy got killed by death as well because death really wanted to kill him death went to go and find the second brother on death’s tracking device that he put on him he was in 1988 so death went there and saw him in the park death was about to kill him but he went to 1987 so deathwent there the second brother mack saw death and quickly teleported 1986 but death was there first but quickly mack teleported he went to his house and killed himself that was death’s plan all along. The third brother death could not find because of the invisibility cloak he searched for years and years and years until when the third brother jack gave up when he was about 70 and gave his invisibility cloak to his son he said to his before he left I Love you so much and always have this over you and gave his son a kiss on the cheek and death took jack an flew away with him.
THE END
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