Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 18 June 2020

Ahmets Journey Comic Strip

W.A.L.T  writing a comic strip
Today I was learning about making a comic strip.
I enjoyed making this because it was about this refugee boy that traveled from syria to london and has lost his sister mum dad and cat.
I found it challenging to get my goggle slides done because I had to really think about it.
My digital learning object shows I know how to make a comic strip.
Next time I would change some of the pictures.

Friday, 6 March 2020

This is just to say

The Author was William carlos williams it is where you have either eaten somebody's food or done something naughty my one was where I stole my brothers chocolate bar when he bought it with his own money when wanted to eat it he said where is my chocolate bar i said i ate it and he got so angry that he started to chase me i ran like i never ran before. my digital learning object shows that i have made a screencastify.

Friday, 7 February 2020

Summer Holidays

We are learning to describe in our writing when we write our story or poem like use adjectives or specific nouns or juicy verbs and I found it challenging to use my adjectives 


Remember
driving to Baywave to see the big waves for my birthday in Tauranga.
I slid down the zooming fast slide.

Remember
Tauranga was boiling hot mostly all week.
We saw Mr Whippy at Memorial Park
and swam in the fountain and got all soaked
then when you hopped out your feet would get all dirty from the grass
and then the buzzing bees were buzzing around us.
We got home and got into the kids room and was as cold as an ice cube which was really nice because it was so hot outside.
That was summer.


Friday, 29 November 2019

writing magicians

What you were learning about the tale of the three brothers because that was our writing subject What you enjoyed writing it in because some of it was out of my words and some was from the story What you found challenging writing in the right words because the person that is reading this will not understand what I am saying What you would change next time the font because this is a boring font
Crack! Crack! the three wise brothers Alex Mack and Jack were walking down a dead and spooky trail that nobody used ever.  It was almost midnight  the three brothers appeared to find this River it was too treacherous to path or swim through. They used their powerful wands to build a bridge suddenly death appeared when the oldest brother was about to pass the bridge‘’uh oh said Mack the middle brother what is going on’’. and the dead tree turned into death . Death said I will give you one wish the oldest brother wanted a teleportation cloak but death tricked him and always knew where he was going to teleport when the brother teleported away. But death would find him anyways. The second brother wanted to go back in time but death also tricked the second brother and knew what century he would go to. The third brother was smarter than his other brothers he wanted an invisibility cloak death did not want to give it to him but he had to. He got his invisibility cloak then all the brothers went walking home. They all fell asleep when they got home the third brother did not feel safe so he put his invisibility cloak on him. When it was the next morning Alex the oldest brother went outside to brag about himself he was in the most busy bit of town and showed everyone his teleportation cloak. He said I am the best in town and the whole intire world. He teleported everywhere shops and to his home then one night the most popular guy in town went and killed the oldest brother when death was supposed to do it so he killed the popular guy got killed by death as well because death really wanted to kill him death went to go and find the second brother on death’s tracking device that he put on him he was in 1988 so death went there and saw him in the park death was about to kill him but he went to 1987 so deathwent there the second brother mack saw death and quickly teleported 1986 but death was there first but quickly mack teleported he went to his house and killed himself that was death’s plan all along. The third brother death could not find because of the invisibility cloak he searched for years and years and years until when the third brother jack gave up when he was about 70 and gave his invisibility cloak to his son he said to his before he left I Love you so much and always have this over you and gave his son a kiss on the cheek and death took jack an flew away with him.
THE END



Friday, 6 September 2019

bee report

Bees are insects of the living world and they have two compound eyes a compound eyes and three small eyes up the top of their head. Bees also have 6 legs  and they look like a yellow black insect.  They have a thorax and by its thorax it has a stinger when the insect see’s danger coming it stings you and in a while it dies.

Location
The bee lives in a hive or it lives in the garden or in the woods. Some bees are born in the honeycomb some bees even go to country to country and some even live in india.

Do you know that  the worker bees who collect the honey vomits it out for the other bees to eat and then the bee that ate it vomits it out as well. A bee can fly and also make honey   by its mouth and it has a pollen basket and male bees are called drones they do not have a stinger also a bee collects pollen and well the insect is flying  all the pollen falls off the bee and goes onto the flower  and then that flower pollinate. Okay here is another  fact do you know by its antenna it has a proboscis and the proboscis are used for chewing food like honey or sucking up liquids .