Summer Holidays

We are learning to describe in our writing when we write our story or poem like use adjectives or specific nouns or juicy verbs and I found it challenging to use my adjectives 


Remember
driving to Baywave to see the big waves for my birthday in Tauranga.
I slid down the zooming fast slide.

Remember
Tauranga was boiling hot mostly all week.
We saw Mr Whippy at Memorial Park
and swam in the fountain and got all soaked
then when you hopped out your feet would get all dirty from the grass
and then the buzzing bees were buzzing around us.
We got home and got into the kids room and was as cold as an ice cube which was really nice because it was so hot outside.
That was summer.