Thursday, 28 May 2020

My Poppa's Funeral

Today we were doing our writing and mine was about my poppa's funeral.
We were learning to use a hook.
We had to use juicy verbs and different sentence starters.
I enjoyed doing this writing because I really miss my poppa but I am still happy.
I found it challenging to get my writing all done in my book because I was a bit behind.


A long four hours trapped in the car felt like a prison waiting and waiting to get to our destination. Me vomiting in the back I felt very yuck. We got to our place and waited for everyone to turn up. Walking to the cemetery to bury my poppa, some people were sad, some even crying. We said our final goodbyes to my poppa. My nana bawled with tears, streaming out of her eyes. Getting into our pyjamas we lay in bed. My Mum made popcorn, some were eating some were food fighting. After a long night with my cousins Haylen, Stormur and Asher food fighting, we slept and woke up to cleant it up. After cleaning, we ate breakfast which was bacon and eggs and then left for our way home.


3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Eva. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked your story.
    I learnt that the car felt like a prison.
    Mā te wā
    Kylah

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  2. Hi Eva I'm sorry for your loss I hope you feel better.
    I like your story.
    I like the part where you said you had a deliosios breakfast.
    If you want you could put a picture or a video next time.
    By Eva see you next time.
    Blog you later my cookies 💝

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  3. Kia ora. I am Sarah from St Mary’s School.
    I really like your story.
    Next time you could say where you were going.
    here

    Mā te wā
    Sarah

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