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Yesterday and today we did writing to practice for our speeches coming up so we did it about on how animals should not be kept in zoos and this is the reason why they shouldn't be in there.
Would a zoo be a good place for animals?
I strongly believe that animals should not be kept in zoos. It is Cruel for them because some of the babies get taken away form their Mums, taken away from their habitat, go into cages and need the zoo keepers to feed them Tourists feed them junk food and it makes the animals unhealthy when they go to the zoo some of their natural hunting goes away because the zoo keepers feed them and that means they don’t hunt anymore. When Baby elephants are taken away from their Mums, they go through depression.
Our animals need to be saved and be happy.
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